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IJFILWAD +Part 2+

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The next morning, I got ready for school early. I waited for my sister to wake up and get ready. Once she did, I rushed her out the door and we walked to school together. We picked up Serafina along the way and continued on. Judy and Serafina started talking about Rob.

"Hey Judy…what do you think of Rob??" Serafina asked.

"Oh, I don't know…he is gorgeous and seems like a sweet guy, but I'd never have a chance with him." Judy replied. I nodded in agreement.

"Oh, really? And why is that?" Serafina asked.

"Well, Fina…that is because he's Kels' man! Or is going to be…they're perfect for each other!" She replied in a happy tone. I nodded my head in a quick matter. Fina shook her head and smiled.

"Well, she's going to have to work at that…after all, she is shy around him. All she does is stare at his face…" Fina began.

"While you stare at his @$$?" Judy asked. I snickered.

"Yeah, I guess so," She laughed.

"What is wrong with you girls?" I giggled.

They looked at each other and said in unison, "We've been hanging out with you too much."

"And I have to live with her! I can’t wait until I'm 18…," Judy said, sounding desperate. I frowned. She then laughed.

"You know I'm just playing around with you…right?"

"Yes…but let me remind you that I'm going to move out before you. And when I do…you'll have to live with Jake until you move out!" I exclaimed.

"NOOO!!!" Judy yelled in agony. She then put her arms on Fina's shoulder and pretended to cry. Fina patted Judy's head in a comforting way.

"It'll be okay Judy…I promise," Fina began. "You can come and live with me…unless, of course, I become Kelsey's roommate. Then you're on your own." Judy's fake crying became even louder. I only laughed.

In a few minutes, we got to school and walked to our lockers, and since our lockers are next to each other, we continued to hang out before class. As I opened my locker, I remembered something. – Rob was sharing my locker with me, so he'd be coming over to me soon. I sighed and became a little nervous. Although, he's a sweetheart and I've talked to him before, he still puts the pink in my cheeks.

In a few minutes, Fina and Judy closed their lockers. They turned around and were staring at something and giggling. I raised an eyebrow and wanted to turn around, but someone cupped their hands around my eyes.

"Who is this?!" I asked.

"Yo mamma," I heard a familiar male voice say. I felt my cheeks burning up, but I couldn't help but laugh.

"Hey Ma. I never knew you got left back so much!" I said, sounding stupid.

"Well…you know how slow some blondes could be…or anyone else for that matter.!" He said in a feminine voice.

I giggled. He took his hands off my eyes and wrapped his arms around me.

"How's my new locker mate doing?" Rob asked, putting his cheek against mine.

"Oh…just fine," I said. I felt me cheeks burn up more than ever before in my life. Boys never hug me. Or put their faces against mine.

After Rob finished his 'good morning hug', he let go and went into our locker to get his books. I smiled and giggled at him, remembering what Judy and Fina had said before him. He noticed and smiled back. He then turned back to the locker. I sighed and then turned around.

I began to hear whispers coming from people around me. I turned around and tried to ignore them, even though I knew they had to be about Rob and me. I noticed Fina and Judy staring at me with their jaws dropped. Judy walked over and dragged me towards them.

"KELSEY! Why did he hug you?" Judy said, sounding disappointed.

"I have no clue, actually," I replied.

"Well, now the girls are going to be jealous of you because they'll think you just snagged the hottest guy in our class," Fina said. She sighed. Then she smiled. I could hear Judy say something about Fina thinking he has a cute butt again.

"OH JOY! You'll be able to torture Julie and the girls…hahaha! I'm glad I thought of that...I'm brilliant, PURE BRILLIANT!" Fina yelled. Julie and her group of friends stared at us. Fina noticed and just rolled her eyes.

The Latino girl in the group walked over to us. She is the girl named Julie. She looks just like Jennifer Lopez. She acts like she's famous like J Lo to. She's the most outgoing and flirtatious girl in our class. If there was a guy she liked in class, she would make sure she'd go on a date with him.

"Hey, what are you talking about? Who's the hottest guy in class?" she asked in a snobby tone.

"We're talking about-" Judy started off, but was interrupted when Rob walked up to us and finished her sentence.

"Me?! Wait…that can't be me. I'm too ugly to be hot." He laughed. Julie's jaw dropped.

"Actually, it is! I can't believe we never met before…I saw you in our first class, but I never got the chance to say hello! I'm sorry…" Julie said, putting on her puppy dog look. I glared at her.

The fact is, if we didn't mention him, she would have never talked to him. The reason? If Julie didn't know we liked him, then she could care less. Ever since that incident with us telling her 3rd ex-boyfriend this year that had a crush on someone else, she tried to ruin our love lives. Hence, I've never had a boyfriend. Until Rob….well, he isn’t my boyfriend yet.

"That's alright! Not like it matters, I never noticed you anyway." Rob said, smiling.

"What?! But everyone notices me…" She said, sounding upset.

"Well, I'm not everyone, am I now?" He shrugged.

"I know but…" Julie began, sounding desperate, but I knew she was faking it all. "I want you to notice me…after all, I think you're really cute. And I wanted to know-" he was cut off. That's good, because I was going to slap her since she was being so annoying.

"To know what? If I'd go out with you? Sorry…but my heart is set on someone else." Rob said happily.

"What? Who?!" She asked getting annoyed. I giggled.

"You're looking right at her…" he said, mysteriously. He made weird little noises. Julie was getting mad. I was getting weirded out.

"…Kelsey? Eww…" Julie said, looking like she was about to throw up. While I, on the other hand shook my head. He can't be talking about me…can he?

"You're just jealous since she's prettier than you can ever be…not that you're that pretty to start," He said in an obnoxious tone.

I see now – he's probably using me as an excuse to get her away from him. Oh well...but wait. He just called me prettier than Julie, one of the prettiest girls in High School. He's crazy.

"Ugh…forget it. You're one of those guys who are full of himself and arrogant, aren't you? You better stay out of my way…" Julie growled. She then turned around and began to walk away.

When she was far away from us, Fina, Judy and I started cracking up. Rob just smirked and realized something. "Girls...we're late for class." Rob announced.

We immediately stopped laughing and our eyes widened. Judy began to panic and ran to her class. I ran to get my books from my locker and I ran to class with Fina and Rob.
When we got there, we opened up the door and barged in while Mr. Hofmann was announcing something.

"SORRY WE'RE LATE!!" We all yelled together. Mr. Hofmann looked annoyed, but slowly got a calm expression again.

"That's quite alright…now since you're late, you might not be paired up with as partners with whoever you want!" He said, raising his voice a little.

"Serafina, you will be paired up with James…" Mr. Hofmann said. Serafina blushed since Jamie, as we call him, was staring right at her.

"OK!" Fina said, trying to act normal, but failed. She walked over to the seat next to Jamie's.

"Kelsey…you'll be paired up with Robert." Mr. Hofmann said. I sighed with relief. Before I knew it, Rob was hugging me. Everyone in the class was staring. I could feel my cheeks burning up.

"Thanks, Mr. Hofmann! We won't disappoint ya!" Rob said cheerfully.

"Right then…" He said, a little weirded out. He mouthed to me 'What is he doing?'. I shrugged. Rob and I then went and sat at our desks.

Throughout the class, we had been learning about frogs. I was wondering why he would make us do this. Soon enough, it hit me. We were going to have to dissect them today. I could feel butterflies in my stomach. I had never liked watching surgery, and now I'm going to have open up a frog's stomach or else I would fail the class today. I sighed.

Soon enough, Rob brought over a green frog on a plate. I felt like I was going to barf. He took out a few tools and slowly cut open the frog's stomach. I imagined that my face looked green now. I just turned away.

"Hey…I never knew THIS is what a frog's stomach looked like! Hm, what is this thing? Oh! It's is large intestine. Hey, Kelsey, you have to look at this!" He exclaimed. I slowly turned around and was horrified. Before I knew it, the intestine slipped out of his tweasers and hit my face. At that moment, I became nauseated , got up and ran to Mr. Hofmann. I said I was going to go to the bathroom, and left the room before he could answer me.

After I was done getting sick, I went back to the classroom. I apologized to the teacher and went back to my seat.

"Where did you go?" Rob asked innocently.

"Just needed to use the bathroom, but now I'm back." I replied happily. He smiled.

"Well, good! You're missing the best part!" He said, sounding very excited. I smiled.

"What's that??" I said, getting excited myself.

"I just found the frog's guts!" He said. I grimaced and passed out onto the desk.

"MR. HOFMANN! WE HAVE AN EMERGENCY!!" I heard Rob yell, before I blacked out completely.

~*~

About an hour or two later, I woke up in the nurse's office. She gave me some Alka Seltzer and I relaxed in the office for a while until I stopped feeling light headed. She asked me if I wanted to go home, but I refused. I wanted to see Rob again, although I'll be mortified. I wanted to take that chance.

When I got out of the nurse's office, I noticed it was 11:00 so I went to lunch. When I got there, I ran to Judy. She was eating by herself.

"Hey sis! You missed the most embarrassing moment of my life." I frowned. She raised an eyebrow.

"Go on." She said since she was now interested. I told her the story and she burst out laughing.

"You were afraid of intestines??" She tried to say as she laughed.

"They flew onto my face." I said, now annoyed. She only laughed louder. I slapped her in the head.

As we were playfully fighting, Fina and Rob walked over to our table. Fina sat across from me and Rob continued to stand.

"I'm glad you're alright now," Fina commented. I smiled and tried giving her an air hug. We laughed as she was returning it. Judy rolled her eyes and smiled. Rob smiled for a minute and then tried to get my attention.

"Kelsey…can I talk to you for a minute?" he asked.

"Sure! Sit down." I said, smiling.

"I mean alone…"

"Oh…" I said, now blushing slightly from my mistake. I got up and walked with him towards another table, far from everyone else. He pulled out a chair for me and I sat down, smiling at the fact that he was such a gentleman. Then he sat down.

"Kelsey…I'm sorry about before. Really sorry." He said with a frown on his face.

"That's alright, really. Is that the reason you had me come with you over here?"

"Not exactly. It has to do with the reason, though."

"Well, what's the reason?" I said smiling.

"I wanted to make it up to you about before by asking you…if…if…" He said, choking on his words.

"Yes??" I said, now smiling. He pulled on his shirt collar and sighed.

"I was wondering…can I take you to dinner tomorrow at the diner?" He asked. He began smiling again. My jaw dropped. He was asking me on a date.

"OF COURSE!!" I exclaimed rather loudly. I could feel my cheeks burn up and he began laughing. I began laughing with him, too.

"OK, then I'll pick you up at 6:30?" He asked. I nodded and wrote down my address for him. I smiled and then we both went and got lunch.

~*~*~

As the rest of the day went by, I kept on thinking about Rob and talking to the girls about our date-to-be. Judy was kind of jealous but happy for me. Fina was overjoyed for me. And so was I.

When school was over, Rob walked me home while Judy walked Fina home. Before I went to go inside, my mother opened the door.

"Heya sweetie!...Who is he?" My mother asked.

"This is Rob." I said. He waved and smiled.

"Oh…is this the boy you were talking about two nights ago?" She asked. I blushed and shook my head. Before I could answer, Jake came to the front door.

"HE'S HERE?! Hey…he's not a cueball! WHAT IS THIS?!"

"No, not really. I have plenty of hair on my head, kid." Rob commented.

"Whatever." Jake said. He then walked inside. I wanted to smack him for embarrassing me like that.

"Well…I'll see you tomorrow night, if that's alright with your mother." Rob said to me. I turned to my mom and made puppy dog eyes.

"Well, of course! Are you two going on a date?"

"To dinner," He said.

"Oh. I've wanted to go out for dinner for a while. How about we all go to the same diner?" She suggested.

"Great! As long as I get to sit with Kelsey alone," He said with a smile. I blushed.

"Of course…we’ll sit at the table across from you."

"Oh, God," I whispered to myself.

"So it's a plan! We’ll see you tomorrow, Rob," My mother commented. He nodded and began to walk away.

"I'll pick you up at 6:30, Kelsey! Bye!" Rob yelled out. I said okay and he continued on walking. I waved to him and he did the same in return. I then walked inside and sat down. Soon after, my sister Judy walked in and sat down next to me.

"So, are you looking forward to your date tomorrow?" Judy asked.

"Not as much anymore."

"Why?" Judy asked, now confused.

"You, Mom and that little demon of a brother are coming with us because of Mom."

"Aw man…it sucks to be you!"

"Yeah. But at least I have a date!" I pointed out.
It's really long, this part...*SQUEE*

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Another great chapter! Well done, mate!! Ok, so while in my creative writing class, the teacher gave us some pretty goods words of advice/teaching stuff, so I thought I would pass it along to you, cuz you know, you write and maybe it will come in handy.

Metaphors - in the words of Aristotle, " The act of giving a thing a name that belongs to something else" - in kelsey talk - spice things up! open up our senses by describing in different senses or terms, it gives the reader a little more to think about.

Cliffhangers - leave us wanting more, leave us pondering with questions in mind. Don't be afraid to twist things up a bit!

Points of View - don't be afraid to switch points of view or delve deeper into the thoughts of your characters. Let us know whats going through there heads. Be careful not to go over board though and confuse the reader. Doing these things can help us relate to the character more and feel a little more connected.

Ok, that's just what my teacher told me. You don't have to use them if you don't want, cuz your story is amazing already, I just thought I would pass the knowledge along.